Well thought and set out assignment. I enjoyed reading it.
I liked that you conveyed the difficulty you had in completing step two. You could have tried your accounting department at work, just a handy hint for next time :) Although, online forum shows resourcefulness.
One thing in Step 3 you have a $ in brackets beside sales and variable cost, however youve used $ in the rest of the table. What should be in the brackets is S and VC so that when you go to use it in line three of the table, it actually makes sense as to what S and VC are.
Otherwise the assignment is thorough and well written. Well done.
hi Christian, so nice to view your ASS#2 draft here, I could remember the last time to feedback your ASS#1 which was well done. And I could estimate that your work would be the exemplar of the ASS#2 in the next semester ^_^. I would like to leave feedback to you again.
step 1 the thought you had after reading chapter 4 is same as me, which is confusing to understand. you also had questioned much about your difficulties of understanding that I strongly agree with that. to be advised is that give more evidence of your own experiences to support the point of view, not simply express what you are thinking, because for the last SPAs I lose marks due to the lack of evidence of my own experiences.
step 2 in this part you did really well, you did communicate and discuss with others and provide the content of what you guys talk about, that is what I should learn from.
step 3 I found these three tables are so detailed and evident to get to know about the prices and costs of these products. have you viewed the exemplars on the Moodle? I think some of them are not as complex as yours. I suggest that it would be perfect if you provide more information about what these products actually are and explain more about where the variable costs come from, because I had a little confusing understanding about that part.
GOOOOOOD JOB Christian! and best luck for your study.
Just finished reading through your assignment two and here is my feedback for you mate!
I enjoyed reading your Step 1. It sounds like you had some of the same thoughts as I did about restating the annual reports. I do have a question here however, in the ass2 requirements it asks to write down your KCQ’s to the reading and reactions, it feels a bit to me there is also commentary around step 2 in here which got me a little distracted when I was trying to read how you were reading and relating to the chapter.
Reading through step 2, again I feel your pain! You really expressed your emotions and thoughts in this section and your statements look ideal. Thanks again for your help with step 2 on my assignment!
I read your step 3 and loved it. I liked the massive amount of detail you provided around your CM, sales and VC!
Hey Christian,
ReplyDeleteWell thought and set out assignment. I enjoyed reading it.
I liked that you conveyed the difficulty you had in completing step two. You could have tried your accounting department at work, just a handy hint for next time :) Although, online forum shows resourcefulness.
One thing in Step 3 you have a $ in brackets beside sales and variable cost, however youve used $ in the rest of the table. What should be in the brackets is S and VC so that when you go to use it in line three of the table, it actually makes sense as to what S and VC are.
Otherwise the assignment is thorough and well written. Well done.
Best of luck
Stace
hi Christian,
ReplyDeleteso nice to view your ASS#2 draft here, I could remember the last time to feedback your ASS#1 which was well done. And I could estimate that your work would be the exemplar of the ASS#2 in the next semester ^_^. I would like to leave feedback to you again.
step 1
the thought you had after reading chapter 4 is same as me, which is confusing to understand. you also had questioned much about your difficulties of understanding that I strongly agree with that. to be advised is that give more evidence of your own experiences to support the point of view, not simply express what you are thinking, because for the last SPAs I lose marks due to the lack of evidence of my own experiences.
step 2
in this part you did really well, you did communicate and discuss with others and provide the content of what you guys talk about, that is what I should learn from.
step 3
I found these three tables are so detailed and evident to get to know about the prices and costs of these products. have you viewed the exemplars on the Moodle? I think some of them are not as complex as yours. I suggest that it would be perfect if you provide more information about what these products actually are and explain more about where the variable costs come from, because I had a little confusing understanding about that part.
GOOOOOOD JOB Christian!
and best luck for your study.
Hey CT!
ReplyDeleteJust finished reading through your assignment two and here is my feedback for you mate!
I enjoyed reading your Step 1. It sounds like you had some of the same thoughts as I did about restating the annual reports. I do have a question here however, in the ass2 requirements it asks to write down your KCQ’s to the reading and reactions, it feels a bit to me there is also commentary around step 2 in here which got me a little distracted when I was trying to read how you were reading and relating to the chapter.
Reading through step 2, again I feel your pain! You really expressed your emotions and thoughts in this section and your statements look ideal. Thanks again for your help with step 2 on my assignment!
I read your step 3 and loved it. I liked the massive amount of detail you provided around your CM, sales and VC!
All in all, top job mate, well written!
Cheers, Nick